English Article: Generation Z

Good evening dear community!

I had in English a short article (approximately 250 words) write and have now written in the fast one. Are me now but not really sure if that is also so halfway in order. Matching titles I still have not found. I just sometimes quite difficult to do, even with the dictionary to find the right phrases and words. The teacher told us to try the essay possible informally to write the readership reach. Request for fast feedback. Thank you so much!

Article:

What about the youth of today? Are we lazy as adults are always telling us or has our generation no hopes for future? Some of our parents do not understand our situation and worries. The matriculation is one of our great fears what generation 'gray hair', honestly, does not really understand. As the school is not challenging enough, we have to cope with familiar, social and other difficulties and for some of us it is even worse.

A difficult family background or to be socially excluded are problems we might have to face in our life. To be in trouble with your parents, to lose a best friend can beat you to your knees and take your self-confidence and perspective. No success instead of stress can make you powerless without any ambitions. It is true we did have big opportunities Compared to the older generations, but the fear of failure is oft bigger. Even though our doors are always open to any occupation we want to do, it can be quite hard under Achieving-pressure.

This is why it is so important to find ways how to support today's youth and to prevent adolescents from a social decline or from becoming a NEET. Schools Could organize projects in Which students get some advice about Their future plans. Advisers Could be invited to help students and encourage them to pursue Their ambitions. Especially a conversation between teacher and student can be very helpful. Of course, it's a matter of will and confidence, but support is better than picking on the bad sides of our generation.

The best answer

What about the Youth of Today (better: s-genitive)? Are we (here missing something.) Lazy as adults are always telling us or has our generation no hopes for future? Some of our parents do not understand our situation and worries. (---) Matriculation (I would choose here another word.) Is one of our great fears

what generation 'gray hair', honestly, does not really understand.

As (---) school is not challenging enough, we have to cope with familiar, social and other difficulties and for some of us it is even worse. (???)

A difficult family background or to be socially excluded are problems we might have to face in our life. To be in trouble with your parents, to lose a best friend can beat you to your knees and take your self-confidence and perspective.

No success instead of stress can make you powerless (missing here something.) Without any ambitions (???).

It is true did (style) we have big opportunities Compared to the older generations, but the fear of failure is oft bigger. Even though our doors are always open to any occupation we want to (or rather would like to) do, it can be quite hard under Achieving-pressure.

This is why it is so important to find ways (---) to support today's youth and to prevent adolescents from (---) social decline or from becoming a NEET. Schools Could organize projects in Which students get some advice about Their future plans. Advisers Could be invited to help students and encourage them to pursue Their ambitions. Especially a conversation between teacher and student can be very helpful. Of course, it's (short forms like these should be avoided in the written language.) A matter of will and confidence, but support is better than picking on the bad sides of our generation.

The bold print must be corrected. I hope I did not forget anything. For the vocabulary and spelling, I recommend a good (online) dictionary, eg pons.com, ego4u.de for grammar and englisch-hilfen.de.

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Date: 2019-01-18 Views: 2

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