Hilfeee is the application so ok?

Application as an assistant in the retail

Dear Mr XX, with great interest I read your ad and would like to apply hereby order the advertised temp space in retail.

Currently I attend the 12th grade at the Musterschule in Musterhausen that I'll expect to complete in the summer of 2016 of a university.

For a temporary help for single clerk I decided, because I have the strengths such as teamwork, reliability, enthusiasm, adaptability and motivation, joy and ability to openly approach people. The I could in a hospital, where I've worked and completed my internship, show. Therefore, this interesting and varied professional fits very good to me.

About an invitation to a personal conversation I would be very happy. Best regards.

The best answer

Hello Yagren,

at gigs, I find it better to advance personally visit the operation and to inquire about employment opportunities. It is important however that you get with the Managing Director / Branch Manager (or, if available, HR) speak and you can not get rid of an employee with a reference to a written application.

Then you have to talk to the advantage of the first personal impression and, at best, maybe you need any written application.

If you do, you do so in the application process ever get the first points in terms of initiative and sociability, and moreover, you have that a first contact, know to whom you have to write, can you refer to it in letter and are then for those already not more totally foreign. And for all your questions that you would like to clarify before the written application, so you have the opportunity.

But also in the negative case, if it so there is no job opportunity for you or do not like you there, you would have an advantage, and indeed could you save time and money for the written application.

If you need a written application, you can then again a new draft set this function (please complete and anonymous). Suggestions you can find for example here. Karrierebibel.de/dossier-bewerbungsschreiben-das-gehort-ins-anschreiben/

Dear Mr XX, with great interest I read your ad and would like to apply hereby order the advertised temp space in retail.

Better sounds (and is I think even really): [...] with great interest m [...]

I, possess open approach people's strengths such as teamwork, reliability, enthusiasm, adaptability and motivation, joy and ability. The I could in a hospital, where I've worked and completed my internship, show. Therefore, this interesting and varied professional fits very good to me.

I would be on fewer but really meaningful strengths, such as teamwork, reliability, openness and curiosity may still limit here. If you take too much affects the fast overbearing. Although you have to be self-aware, but that's for my taste too much.

This I was able to show, when I graduated from my internship in a hospital (or something like that, it is about the sentence structure).

For these reasons, I spoke this profession very at (would not directly "interesting and varied professional" write).

Of course, all this is just my feeling, but I had to even write applications and since my father has to ever worry about applications in his profession, I know so halfway what "negative" strikes, where there are several reasons with you.



I hope I could you at least help a little,

MfG

So first of all you should specify exactly where you read the display .. then the whole purpose of the thing is.

In addition, I would enumerate no thousand properties. It would be better if you write "by the experience [....] I could acquire some properties. These include .."

Is quite good

Date: 2019-02-28 Views: 0

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