Holiday Request (English) improvement / Tips

I and four friends plan our vacation in Amsterdam to spend. And I would ask you to help me to improve my request. Here are the "pattern" request:

Dear Ms. (...)

We are writing to you Regarding your offer on (website of the offer).

We would like to request your apartment from 21.7 to 27.7.15. We are 5 students from Berlin, Germany, at the age of 18 and want to go on holiday in Amsterdam.

Would you please send me an indication of your rates per night.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely, (Your Name).

The best answer

Dear Ms. (...)

We are writing to you Regarding your offer on (website of the offer).

We would like to request your A partment from 21.7 to 27.7.15. We are 5 students from Berlin, Germany, at the age of 18 and want to (or rather would like to) go on holiday in Amsterdam.

Would you please send me an indication of your rates per night.

Thanking you in advance.

Yours sincerely,

(My name)

- Either behind the greeting and the closing formula put a comma or omit the comma both behind the greeting of and behind the final formula.

The bold print must be corrected. I hope I did not forget anything. For the vocabulary and spelling, I recommend a good (online) dictionary, eg pons.com, ego4u.de for grammar and englisch-hilfen.de.

:-) AstridDerPu

So, have today written about Schulaufgabe in English and have it actually just. But I might still be the reason (if there is one) to add, because it can otherwise be advised that they reject you because you could come to the apartment drunk overnight yes and it so others could scare or there could be complaints. So was my brother who wanted also to Amsterdam and at the time was also the 18th

Date: 2019-03-08 Views: 0

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